in the spur of the moment with a lack anything else to do in bio yesterday, i finally got my writing muse back after not being able to write anything truely signifigant that i didn't force myself to write. what was it? and assassin's creed fanfiction. i had been tossing this idea around for a few days now, since my obsession with it has been renewed. though it is going well, i am stuck.

here is the last paragraph i have so far:

Sleep encompassed me for a few hours until the sound of somebody landing inside the room startled me awake. i rolled over in the bed and stared blankly back at the white-clad figure who stood in the thin beam of moonlight.
i opened my nouth to say something, but it took a minute for the words to fprm in my head, "um . . . who are you?"

i'm stuck as too what i should but next. my character is a girl disguised as a boy who accidentally stubbled into Masyaf, and the person who lands in the room is Altair. i know i want a conversation to start, but what should he say? the only catch is, he has to sound pissy. doesn't matter what it's about, just pissy.

here are the suggestion i have recieved from :
Altair will say: "who am i? shouldn't you be more concerned about the fact i'm saving you?
"shouldn't you be more worried about your self?

and here is what i cam up with:
Altair will say: "an assassin." then he leaves and my character is all "what the fuck was that about?" @.@

i don't know which one to choose. i'm taking a vote: the line with the most votes wins. you have to vote in a comment to my journal entry as i don't have premium membership and am unable to make a pole.

i tack just about any idea that i am given and run with it. if you can help me, i'll metion you in the artist's comments when i post it.